my new app

This is my new app idea. You create a super hero or villian than you make your own leave and then you play it and destroy your enimie and then the level will get harder and you can create the people you destroy and you can make a boos. This idea is copy writed.

Feedback

Gloria:

You did a pretty good job putting pictures in. I think you should have added some more time in spaces so you had more time to read what you wrote. Because you had some really good reason's in your script.

Zelma:

I think you did a great job with your imovie, you also had some really good reason's. I think you should have made your slides longer, because I had to pause it to read the reasons because they were a bit long. You also need to put the sources for pictures and information.

Claire: You did a wonderful job with your imovie. I think you could have out some more pictures in because you had a lot of writing. And you had some very good reason's I think you should have also slowed down each slide a bit. You had a great introduction into the whole idea about why computers are so good.

Clarissa: You did a good job with your imovie I really liked your extranormal it was very creative and your reason's were also very good. You had a good amount of pictures but their could have been more. You did a awesome job.

ten Reason's Why Technology is good

My script for my comic

Slide 1 reason #1

Slide 2 reason #2

Slide 3 reason #3

Slide 4 reason #4

Slide 5 reason #5

Slide 6 reason #6

Slide 7 reason #7

Slide 8 reason #8

Slide 9 reason #9

Slide 10 reason #10

Ten Reason's Why Technology is good

Reason#1 A computer is twenty times more available than a teacher so the computer is like a substitute.

Reason#2 There are all the same tools on the web so it is just as good. And you can gather all the same information.

Reason#3 When you have projects it makes the kids more responsible. And you can trust them more instead of always checking on them.

Reason#4 With a computer you can do so much more kind of presentations then just on paper for example you can do imovies,powerpionts and you can put it on a blog.

Reason#5 With a computer it is easier to collaborate constructively when you are doing a project. Because you have email facebook so you have many ways to communicate with them instead of using a cell phone.

Reason#6 With a computer when you talk to someone you can always have a backspace and make sure you want to say that.


Reason#7 With a computer a student can go at there own pace so they do not disturb the class because some people are ahead and some behind.

Reason#8 Three text books weigh more than one laptop and one laptop can have a thumb drive so it is easy access than three books and it is faster.

Reason#9 With a computer you can do so much more work than you can do on paper and you have unlimited paper and you can do it in such a shorter time.

Reason#10 It is cheaper to get one laptop and change it every year than to get three textbooks every year because text books are 120$ for the average.

http://www.mathopenref.com/site/techreasons.html

feedback

Gloria
your slide was very good it had all of the content on it. But I think you should tell more detail bout the person because it was just wait there job is and why you put them in that pose.

Zelma

Zelma your content is very good it is great and you have all the right detail just try to add why you chose that particular pose for each person. Your photos are great they have detail and good facial experisons to. Good job Zelma!

Trailer feedback for everyone

Clarissa
I thought the trailer New moon was very good but you only really talked
about what the movie is about and what is makes people feel,
you should have talked about the shots and instead of the film its self.

Zelma
I thought the movie trailer Alvin and the chipmunks was very good you talked about the shots and what the
narrator is saying you have done an exalent job exaiming this trailer

Gloria
I thought you did an great job with the movie trailer Ice age 3 because you talked about why you wanted to watch the movie,
what you thought was good about the movie, and the type of shots that were in the trailer.

Tommy
I think you did a pretty good job with the movie trailer superhero movie.I just think you could have talked a bit more about the shots than the movie but over all you did a good job.

Megan
I think you have done an awesome job with the spongebob movie trailer you talked about all of the shots involved in the trailer and you were one of the best paragraphs I read good job Megan.

Justin
I think you had done a great job with picking the movie trailer Percy jackson and the lightining thief but you did not write a paragraph on the movie trailer so I don't have muck more to say.

Shrek 4 movie trailer

I thought this movie trailer was very funny but, It had one establishing shot in the being. But besides that there was only really middle shots there was only two long shots but now extreme close ups. But no close ups.

percy jackson the old movie trailer

I Really liked this movie trailer it gave you some close up shot's of when he walked through the door and you see his feet. And also when you see the Elavator buttons. There was only on extreme long shot when you saw the gods castle. There are also some establising shots of the city and the taxi before he gets out of the car. Over all I think this movie trailer had very good variety

Night at the museum 2 trailer

Shots:

ECU: Extreme Close Up: 1

CU: Close Up: 14

MS: Medium Shot: 12

MLS: Middle Long Shot: 12

LS: Long Shot:10

ELS: Extreme Long Shot:1

ES: Establishing Shot:1

Edited Alice in wonderland strips

Tommy's feedback

I think the characters were very cool and the idea was very good, I also liked the expresion's of the people I think you could put the people closer the the screen and farther away from the screen, Oh and one question did you make those character's

My Bitstrips comic

Tech skills

My tech skills are not great, but I am okay with computers I know the basic skills but not anything advanced. I can use both windows and mac computers and use my skills on them. I also do some tech things out of school too. But just things like power pionts and movie trailers.

These pictures represents me as a learner with my tech skills. The first picture represents me because these techno DJ's really calms me down. My second picture is what my name means and if you don't know what it is it is a badger. My third picture is what I love the most it is an albino gerbil just like the one I have called Jerry.