feedback

Gloria
your slide was very good it had all of the content on it. But I think you should tell more detail bout the person because it was just wait there job is and why you put them in that pose.

Zelma

Zelma your content is very good it is great and you have all the right detail just try to add why you chose that particular pose for each person. Your photos are great they have detail and good facial experisons to. Good job Zelma!